Could you read my short story? it's very short and i would love FEEDBACK & if you like it?

I think you could add a little more detail about the setting and combine a few sentences (you could probably make the first two sentences, for example, into one.) Also, I think you should tell the reader more about what the girl is thinking. I don't understand the point of the story just reading what you posted, but I really do like it. You wanted feedback right? Good luck. =]